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First impression

The first impression
Is like a lesson
Take your time, like a session
A session of your pure profession

We have yet to get to grips
There are bound to be a few trips
And maybe we’re bound to join our lips
Or maybe my hands are to go round your hips

One thing’s for certain, know your other
For it can be the worst pain for a lover
To break the heart, hating them over
For something you never saw, you overlooked

Take my hand
I’ll try to make you understand
This is so much more than bland
And so much thicker than a strand

There’s no reason to doubt
With even pain throughout
I could end this pain tonight
And make your heart take flight

And whenever a word comes
Whenever the note strums
Make it heard loud and clear
Never hold to me, any fear
For im there, as is truly clear
And your heart I will never sear

(By Dokugun Ryu)
©2009 ~Achronai
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^_\\\ just a poem with a moral lesson

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:icongloomyfenris:
this one would make a great song
:iconachronai:
^_^ thanks

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Im looking for something deeper than the appearance of others...im looking for the people themselves.

David, J, Dowden

life hurts, but it doesn't have to hurt as much as we make it ~ me
:iconcrash-2-dissapear:
indeed.

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No soy estupida ni rara.......... soy anormal

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